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Spirit Prisoners

 

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I began as a silly girl from Tennessee, USA, but then life kicked me in the skins and I wanted a way out.  I rebelled against my Southern Protestant teachings and investigated world religions, curious what other people thought. After all, the theory that if I remained a good person and treated others rightly wasn’t protecting me from hurt and betrayal.  When I announced, “Things can’t get any worse,” my misery peaked instilling within me a yearning to spark a positive impact for the mass public.  My craving tormented me almost as much as life.

 

I wasn’t prepared to help others at the time and needed to rise above my disappointments.  It took many years, but was well worth my tribulations.  My goal was to elevate all who read my work.

 

My urban fantasy and historical fiction novels portray vulnerable characters facing the complexities of life.  Mankind has digested bits of our multidimensional universe at a time; likewise, my characters expand their understanding one step at a time. 

 

My background incorporates fine art with writing.  My artwork has been featured by New York’s International Fashion Fabric Exhibition, the Orlando Sentinel, the Commercial Appeal, Southern Living and the News Press.  I was recognized by the American Society of Composers, Authors, and Publishers and worked as an attorney for large corporations.  In addition to fiction, I wrote scripts for www.suprememastertv.com, and articles for online publishing companies, such as www.DianaKayPublishing.com and www.itournow.com.  I served as the 2010 Conference Director for the Florida Writer’s Association.

 

Check out Janie Bill At:  www.feelingfiction.com

 

Spirit Prisoners

Synopsis

By Janie Bill

 

Glori Hightower wakes every morning with a sense of doom and regret.  She slugs herself to Royal Palm High in a beautiful Floridian town full of fabulous people, but she is unable to shake a dark feeling of despair.  No one understands what it is to be different.  Her father is gone and her mother is depressed and a kaleidoscope of ghosts swirls around her daily.  She yearns to escape her miserable surroundings.  

After graduation, she plans to move afar and begin anew.  Yet, which of two colleges should she choose?  If she selects the wrong university, she might never find happiness. 

Glori can’t stand not knowing for certain what future lies at each university.   She seeks objective advice from a psychic and her life is never the same, again.  Glori has a bad feeling about the flamboyant psychic but her desire to abandon her haunting past traps her within the psychic’s control.  She panics when the psychic’s horrific predictions begin coming true, one after another. 

Glori cannot stop the worst prophecy of all from materializing.  Her life collapses when she causes a terrible accident.  Desperate to right her wrongs, Glori thrusts herself into the enchanted Everglades in search of the seed of her suffering.  She confronts paranormal elements that are far more threatening than those she encountered back home.  Secrets at the root of her quest stem from ancient mystics and underworld beings. 

How can a simple girl from a sheltered community overtake an army of devil dwellers?  If she fails, all that is dear to her will be consumed by misery for eternity. 

 

 

 

Spirit Prisoners

 

Prologue

 

Innocent blood soaked into her flesh.  Sleepless since the first night of the Green Corn Ceremony, Princess Honovi remained locked in a trance.  Bred to understand her territory with its life-giving fruit trees and circulating waters, she listened to their vibrations.  Soundless music elevated every speck and drifted alongside the angels.  Invincible to Earth’s anger, their vibrations moved at an even heavenlier pitch than the metal tunes played by dworg braisers. 

Princess Honovi felt a wobble interrupt Earth’s smooth rotation.  The hypnotic movement misguided those men whose pale skin coloring came from their bitterness rather than pure actions.  Accompanying them was a shadow of a man who had been charred beyond greed. 

Princess Honovi smelled their approaching scent of rotting flesh.  Oil spilled from the pores of their transparent skin.  Their blue veins throbbed from the pressure created by their deceit.  Straggly hairs snaked around their arms and wormed through their tights.  Her enemies intended to devour her soul.

One man seemed defeated by his actions.  He pushed aside orchids framing the colony.  He didn’t pause to sniff their healing nectar.  He didn’t notice the unique coloring of the stems against the leggy petals.  Ponce de Leon, the leader of the murderers, the looters, the cheaters, the liars, the thieves, and those men who committed so many wrongs they searched for eternal life to avoid penance, although he heard the high-pitched vibrations, his bound spirit snuffed the note. 

An intoxicating smoke billowed from the leaves burning in the open fire – last year’s fire.  The time had come for the light to be suffocated and for a new fire to be ignited in its place. 

Doom grounded, caged her.  Princess Honovi’s concentration expanded throughout the tropical forest.  Her vision raced under the men’s pounding footfalls where the soil slumped in regret for laying the trap.  Blooming bushes trembled as the men broken their branches to create a path for attack.  Cabbage palm trees stiffened and their reliable strength spoke one word with clarity:  Run

A loud snap sounded from the scrubs beside her chickee.  Princess Honovi had stopped Ponce’s crew from stealing the precious water source in two previous battles, but at the cost of innocent lives – women and children whose complacency suited a cohesive colony, but held no value when confronted by with men who stole souls. 

The Ponce crew rushed from the lush groundcover – a beautiful camouflage for the brutal murderers.  Princess Honovi moved faster than the armored men, prancing like a deer toward the hallowed dirt.  The white men’s heated determination swelled throughout the sweaty jungle.

It wasn’t fair.  Divine love should have outwitted metal weapons.  Knowledge should have prevented entrapment.  The gifts from her ancestors should have blocked tragedy.

The peach moon alighted the shell path to the burial grounds.  Princess Honovi tugged on her bracelet, satisfied she was no longer alone.  A copper beam of light penetrated the palm canopy.  Bobbles of the spirits of her ancestors awakened and descended from the heavens. 

Princess Honovi entered the sacred circle, her toes tapping lightly in her haste.  Rosy mist of encouragement enveloped her bare feet.  Dynamic warmth flowed through her.  Precious waters bubbled from the natural spring, flowed through the burial grounds, and fed the garden of life and knowledge.  Only capable of carrying breath and purity, water deflected evil. 

On this night, the last night of the Green Corn Ceremony, the passage to hell opened.  Mankind received the opportunity to defile life by swallowing death whole.  Princess Honovi could not allow Earth’s invitation for evil. 

The wind shifted.  The sky dropped.  A torrential downpour filled the burial grounds.  Nature never interfered with the new year rituals of the Green Corn Ceremony.  Rain would prevent the new fires from being lit by the logs born from the tree of life. 

Failure ripped her muscles and sliced into her chest.  Princess Honovi’s powers had proved useless.  Her mystical jewelry was flawed as a result of being created with minerals and gems removed from the venomous earth. 

A smelly, dark-haired man stepped into her path.  The fool raised his sword and sliced. 

Princess Honovi shielded her eyes as her bracelet fell into his grip.  She dropped to the ground, confused as to why her magical protections hadn’t blocked the pain.  The gurgling waters beckoned her.  If she drank, she could live, but at a terrible cost to mankind. 

Princess Honovi adjusted the broad surface of her silver ring across her palm and staggered to her feet.  Rosy soil swirled higher and hid her head, crystallizing her mind. 

She muttered the sacred word above, within, and below the realm of Earth, “His-a-kit-a-mis-i.” 

Princess Honovi’s true essence would be spared for another day.  Her body would not.

 

Chapter 1

Like a demanding ghost shifting the air to gain attention, a foreboding tingle drifted up Glori Hightower’s right arm as she approached the psychic’s home.  She stopped and scrutinized the bungalow, questioning her intuition.  Hurricane shutters hung over lead-glass windows.  Rust lined the seams of its tin roof.  She couldn’t see the main road behind the surrounding orange grove.  Across a clearing, a barn leaned to one side, as if a warning.  Beyond, a lone train car rusted on weedy tracks.  A part of Glori, the part she didn’t understand, sensed she was about to receive a bad omen.

Glori swallowed hard and held her hands over her heart.  Death saturated the atmosphere. 

“I can’t do it.  This feels wrong.  Trusting some lady who conjures spirits is asking for trouble,” she said.  

Kara put her arm around Glori and pressed forward.  “Stop being a prude.  There’s nothing to be nervous about.  Learning your destiny will be good for you.  It’s been done for centuries, even by smart, famous people, like Abraham Lincoln and Nancy Reagan.”

Glori didn’t respond.  The tingling spread across her chest and swept down her torso.  She knew what was coming, but wasn’t prepared to face an apparition outside her home, not with Kara as a witness.  She dug her high-heel sandals into the ground and shook her head. 

“You can’t make me confide my problems into a total stranger,” she said.

Glori huffed and struggled to break free from Kara’s grip.  Then she saw it.  Above the top porch step, golden sparks wove into a brilliant web of a man’s silhouette.  He looked familiar, but then again, all ghosts glowed.  Despite her willing him to leave, he remained, blocking her path. 

Ghosts were finicky creatures, always banging and flashing when they didn’t get their way.  Glori pointed at the sparks and inhaled the muggy air, but before she managed to form a coherent sentence, the image vanished.

The sensation of being compressed by cold stones lifted and blood returned to Glori’s head.  “I’m okay.  He’s gone.  Maybe he was just a sign for me to be cautious,” she said. 

“Is this anything like the time you threw your shoe out the car window because we crossed a black cat’s path?” Kara asked. 

Glori flushed.  She forgot how strange her superstitions sounded to people who lacked the gift of sight.  She looked around for an excuse for acting neurotic.  Her eyes followed a rainbow running across the porch.

“The sunlight reflecting off the wind chime scared me.  The unicorn figurines looked like hairy vampires.  My peripheral vision distorts images when the sun is bright,” she said.

Kara studied the glass figurines strung from the eave.  She didn’t look convinced.  “I don’t see anything except poor taste.” 

“That’s the scariest part about the unicorns.”  Glori laughed.  “Let’s forget about it.”  She glanced at Kara’s convertible, still unable to shake the prickling sensation creeping through her body.  Maybe she should wait in the car.  “I’ve heard it’s bad luck to question fate.  A slap in the face to the Big Creator, so to speak.” 

“My mom swears by Madame Bonafide.  Her ancestors were brought over here to find the Fountain of Youth.  All the psychics in Evangabella are legitimate.”  Kara pointed to a plaque framed with garlic buds to confirm her information.  “Don’t you want to find out which college is right for you?  You’ve certainly complained about your choices enough to get an objective opinion from a professional.”

“Evaluating my circumstances is not the same as complaining.  Besides, that’s not my only concern.  I happen to have strong feelings about other events in my life.”  Glori bit the inside of her cheek as a sensation of heaviness and death pooled around her. 

Heading up the steps, Glori reached out to where the sparks had been, but felt nothing.  Kara must have noticed, because she peered into Glori’s eyes and said, “You must be sensitive to light reflecting off your contact lenses.  It’s a common phenomenon.”

Uncomfortable with having attention on her muddy eyes, Glori blinked several times.  “It’s gone, so it doesn’t matter.” 

Kara rang a nautical bell mounted on the keystone.  It gave a high-pitched ding.  When no one answered, she tapped her acrylic nails on the lead glass, opened the door and entered. 

“I’m not so sure you should do that,” Glori said, determined to wait outside.  “What if there’re voo doo rings around the house.  We could suffer from an incurable disease or worse.”

“Hello.  We’re here for our appointment,” Kara called. 

Glori turned to leave, but stopped when Kara shrieked. 

“Gross.  There’s a dead bird in here,” Kara shouted.

“He’s not hurt, is he?”  Glori placed her hands over her heart and crossed the threshold. 

The parlor provided little relief from the humidity.  A draft brushed her bare shoulders; she shuddered. 

The decor suggested a 19th century paleontologist had set up shop.  Victorian furniture with crystal fringe gave a peculiar, homey mood.  As if a Florida panther had slashed his way out of a cage, cracks ran down the walls.  Glori winced when she noticed the shocked expressions of mounted raccoons, bobcats and squirrels.  Stacked books, old enough to be collectibles, sat on a leather-top desk.  Lavender potpourri filled an elephant foot and several animal skulls.   

Glori’s eyes wandered to the top of a wardrobe.  A stuffed, black rooster stepped forward with his chest puffed out and his head held high.  He was magnificent.

“Poor little guy.  He didn’t have a chance.”  To Glori, birds were precious creatures.  Their cries glorified nature; their melodies inspired literature.  With dazzling colors in startling patterns, magic gave birds flight.  Even angels, with their white robes and translucent wings, weren’t as spectacular. 

Glori’s dad had shared her fascination, observing birds in their natural settings.  She loved that.  It was the only time he didn’t lose his temper.  He had been a tongue biter.  Deep cracks flared between his lips whenever Glori sang songs, asked too many questions, or teased him for wearing jumpsuits with hunting boots.  She stepped on his untied shoe strings that dragged behind him.  Perhaps he wasn’t allowed happiness during his childhood, working the orange groves like most native Floridians.  Glori missed him.  Appreciating birds kept him alive. 

Kara laughed and Glori lifted her head to join her.  She was a solid six inches shorter than her graceful friend, but thankfully, Glori was better proportioned than Kara’s willowy frame.

“I knew a roasted rooster would get your attention.”  Kara hugged Glori and then examined a metal box with turquoise stones set in strands of braided wires. 

Glori rubbed away her goose bumps and pretended she didn’t feel foolish.  “I hope the psychic gives me good news.  I don’t want to know about anything bad in my future.”

“My mom sees Madame Bonafide once a year and she always gets good news,” Kara said.  “One time when she needed a root canal, Madame Bonafide told her she’d recover in one day.  And she did.”  She folded her arms as though her example clarified things.

Glori nodded, uncertain.  Lifting her hair off her back, she wiped away perspiration on her neck.  She ran her fingers down the bleached ends, making a mental note they needed a trim.  She hated to give up the length.  Kara’s high-lighted bob looked polished, but Glori’s carefree layers were her distinguishing feature.  At least, that’s what Lance said.

Glori stepped around a stuffed alligator used as a coffee table, picked up a red crystal from inside a basket and held it to light cast by a beaded chandelier.  Inside the stone, a charcoal spiral swirled, starting at the base and drifting into its arrow-shaped tip.  Goose bumps rose on her arm and she caught her breath.  “You’ve got to see this.  Something’s living inside the crystal,” she said. 

Before Glori had a chance to see Kara’s reaction, a door beside the kitchen swung open and banged against the wall.  Madame Bonafide emerged.  Her presence stirred the air.  Youthful for a sage, not a line or blemish showed on her tawny complexion.  Glori stood at attention, mesmerized.  She had never seen such a powerful woman. 

Madame Bonafide glided into the parlor, winding along a faded path around a zebra-skin rug.  She had the same naïve expression as the girls who worked in Dad’s convenience stores out in the country.

As if she were a flying squirrel leaping from a tree, the psychic raised her arms and her floor-length caftan spread wide.  Its sequins glittered where the fabric stretched over her tummy.  Primitive images of horses and men holding banners circled the bottom; the sun with rays and birds were under her arms.  Glori wondered how many generations of psychics had worn the remarkable garment.

Humming, Madame Bonafide stood on her toes and waved her tiny hands over Glori’s head.  Glori pushed her bangs behind her ear, nervous about what the psychic could see; worried she couldn’t see anything at all. 

Madame Bonafide pulled a bottle from a hidden pocket and waved it under Glori and Kara’s chins.  Glori’s nose twitched from the sharp scent.  Madame Bonafide dabbed the bottle’s contents onto her fingertip and moved toward her, as if she were about to strike with a knife.

“What is that?”  Glori cowered. 

“Frankincense.  It soothes the mind and gives strength to hear my words.”  Madame Bonafide’s low voice had a comforting drawl. 

When Glori refused the essential oil, the psychic rubbed frankincense on herself and threw back her head with her arms flung out.  After several deep breaths, she looked around dreamily and asked, “Who wants to go first?” 

Kara nudged Glori’s knee, almost knocking her down.  “Glori Hightower has a life-changing question.  Then it’s my turn, but just for fun.”

Madame Bonafide’s expression sharpened.  She circled Glori, taking in every inch of her petite frame. 

“Avoid anyone whose name starts with the letter ‘S,’” Madame Bonafide said. 

“As in the first name or last name?”  Glori glanced at Kara, curious whether this should be funny, but Kara was distracted with arranging necklaces on an Indian woman’s bust. 

“The name you use when speaking to the person.”  Without clarifying further, Madame Bonafide lifted her chin and led Glori to the back. 

Dried banana skins hung from the hinges of a dark den.  Glori wondered whether using material props meant the psychic operated with evil elements.  She tried to smile, but her lips trembled until she sucked them between her teeth. 

Madame Bonafide must’ve noticed her hesitation.  She placed her hand on Glori’s back and said, “It’s safe, my dear.  The bananas keep the bad spirits away.”

“I wasn’t questioning your abilities.  I just wasn’t sure whether knowing the future is a good idea for me, personally,” Glori said. 

“You wouldn’t have come to me if you weren’t sure,” Madame Bonafide said. 

Unsure what else to do, Glori ducked inside, holding her breath in case the skins exuded a sinister force. 

Madame Bonafide closed the door, causing Glori’s eyes to strain in the suddenly dim light.  A crystal ball sat in the center of a table.  Metallic drapes covered the walls.  Propped on the floor were prints of exotic men dressed like ancient shamans with peacock feathers in their turbans.  Glori considered leaving, scared the reading entailed dark arts, but then, she recognized a framed poster of Jesus and another of Mary.  Dried flowers hung from their tarnished picture frames and were scattered on the rug, just like at the chapel where Glori’s older brother was buried.

At least, Glori would’ve had a brother if Hugh hadn’t died before she was born.  It was a neighbor’s college son who did it – killed him with his car as twelve-year-old Hugh rode his bike down Chichester Cove.  Mom never demanded retribution from the Fergusons.  She thought telling people what to do was the most hateful act possible.  Glori understood exactly what she meant.  

Madame Bonafide offered Glori a seat at the table.  Glori noticed the same kind of tablecloth her Granny Emath used – lace sewn between stripes.  More at ease, Glori nodded and sat across from her.  The psychic narrowed her eyes, appearing to test her psychic focus.  Not sure whether she was imagining the pressure at her crown, Glori twitched.  It wasn’t natural for someone else to control of her senses.

“Do you want me to do the tarot cards, use the crystal ball, or read your aura?” Madame Bonafide asked. 

“Which is better?”

“For the most accurate information, I need to read your aura.”  Madame Bonafide tucked her hands under her armpits and rested her elbows on her tummy.  It seemed to make no difference to her whether Glori received a reading or left without another word. 

“Okay then.  Read my aura.  I want you to be accurate.”

Madame Bonafide wiggled her fingers down the length of Glori’s arms, which seemed to cause an invisible tourniquet to tighten around Glori’s temples.

“Relax.  You are re-sisting,” the psychic said.

“I am relaxed.”  Glori straightened.  Now was her perfect opportunity to find out why she was so different from everyone else.  “So, do you think I’m the same as you are?  That I communicate with other dimensions?  Supernatural realms regular people don’t notice?”

“No.  I don’t see such talent in you,” Madame Bonafide said without considering her words. 

Glori studied the psychic’s stern expression, the way she pressed her chin against her chest, the way her eyes penetrated the air around Glori without resting on her.  The psychic’s soft shoulders invited a hug, but her abrupt movements deterred physical contact.

“I thought, all these years since my grandfather died when I was three, I thought I might be gifted.  Like, maybe I can see ghosts.”  Glori shrugged, embarrassed. 

“It must be passed down from generation to generation through the women.  You see my little Livvy, if she lives long enough, she will have the skill.  I will teach my daughter how to use the skill, but I don’t see this for you in your family.” 

A shock ran from the base of Glori’s spine, split into both sides of her skull and ended with a sting.  She hadn’t expected to be upset by learning she wasn’t clairvoyant.  So then, what was she?

“Do I have your permission to invite the spirits to help you?” Madame Bonafide asked.

“I don’t want to disturb any spirits.  I only have one question.  Everything else in my life is under control.” 

Madame Bonafide stared above Glori with a horrified expression, apparently able to see through her words.  Glori lifted her chin to keep the light from the crystal ball from revealing any uncertainty in her eyes. 

“You have only your mother.  It is very difficult for the two of you.  I see these things because the spirits tell me.”

“Mom and I are fine,” Glori said, harsher than intended.  She rubbed her lips, wishing she could put the words back in her mouth.

“To refuse my help is to deny yourself, my dear.  You have no control, only expectations.  Whatever you expect is what happens.  It’s important for you to remember this.”  The psychic squinted and curled her tongue as if reacting to a bitter flavor.  

“What is it?”  Glori scooted forward.  She glanced around the room, making sure no sparks, like the ones outside on the porch, were stalking her.  Peacock feathers were arranged below an iron candle stand.  Their vibrant blues and greens glistened despite the dim light.  Dad had kept peacocks on the Poindexter plantation.  Several still lived there.  A person who likes peacocks couldn’t be all that bad, perhaps just melodramatic.

The psychic held up her finger and angled her ear toward the door.  “Give me a second.  I want to make sure my Livvy is not in any trouble.  She hasn’t been right for a long while.”

Glori listened too, but didn’t hear anything.  After a moment, Madame Bonafide nodded, muttered to herself, and then resumed her trance-like composure.

“You didn’t eat lunch, today.  It’s not good for the blood to skip meals.”  Madame Bonafide emphasized, “It lowers your vibration.”

Glori thought about what she did during lunchtime that day.  She was in the career services library comparing campuses – trying to decide which had better dorms. 

“You can see what I did today?  Can you see anything important?  Something useful?”

“I see the letter, ‘L.’”   The psychic scrunched her face and with a snuffle she softened her features.  “Lance.  This name has meaning to you.”

Glori’s mouth dropped open and she leaned against the table.  The name Lance wasn’t common.  “How did you know about him?” 

“I see his face.”  With a smirk, Madame Bonafide continued, “He needs to cut his hair.  And his shirt, it’s too tight.  He’s very handsome with the way he keeps his body built up.”

“Lance is just a really good friend who’s taking me to prom,” Glori said, too fast to sound convincing.

“Stay away from Lance for he will always hurt you.  You think you can handle him, but you mustn’t try,” Madame Bonafide said.

Glori crossed her legs and sucked on an acrylic nail.  She studied the psychic.  Madame Bonafide’s gifts extended beyond tingling sensations and seeing colorful lights.

More confident, Glori cleared her throat and said, “I need help deciding which college I should attend.  I’m in my final year at Royal Palm High and I got accepted to Central Tennessee and Northern New York.  I have to reply by next Wednesday.”

“What about your mother?  You are willing to leave her?” Madame Bonafide said.

“I want to go out of state,” Glori said.  

Madame Bonafide whispered, “The house.”  As if erasing a bad memory, she smoothed her forehead.  “It’s better for you to stay in Florida for university.”

“I can’t.  Those are the only colleges that accepted me.  Besides, Mom supports whatever decision I make,” Glori said.

Madame Bonafide placed her pinkies over her mouth and hiccupped.  She pressed her fingers against Glori’s temples and stared into her pupils. 

“You are on the wrong path.  If you do not change directions, the spirits must guide you to your right path.  That can be very painful.  Here’s what you need to do, you must return here, tomorrow, so I can do special work for you,” Madame Bonafide said.

Glori forced her gaze away.  Was Madame Bonafide trying to hypnotize her?  Glori noticed the posters of spiritual leaders on the floor, some of whom she trusted.  She bowed her head, ashamed for being paranoid.  She realized she had been twisting her fingers in her skirt.

“Your friend practices evil against you.  You must not speak to her for she will erase the good luck I send you,” Madame Bonafide said.

“Cuddly Kara, in the parlor – evil?”  Glori couldn’t keep from laughing out loud at how foolish she had been, expecting a stranger to solve her problems by answering one question.  No matter her talent for seeing truth, Madame Bonafide lacked focus and provided useless fragments of information.  Glori moved sideways in her seat for a quick escape while the spirits distracted the psychic. 

Madame Bonafide grabbed her neck and gurgled.  Tears fell from her lashes.  Glori gasped, clueless what to do when a person strangles herself.  The psychic threw herself across the table and thrust her finger in her face.  

“If you do not find your path, you will kill your mother.  Do you hear what I am telling you?  Your mother will be dead!”

 

Chapter 2

Granny Emath had warned Glori against getting spiritual advice from strangers.  She claimed it stopped the natural flow of energy the same way rocks placed in a stream created a dam.  But Glori’s energy had been stuck ever since the incident at Disappearing Island – and that was several years ago. 

Glori gathered her books and her bag of goodies Madame Bonafide had sold her before she made it out from under the banana skins.  When Glori swung the convertible door closed, she noticed Kara’s face was set, the way she looked when her boyfriend had smiled at a surfer girl.

“Are you okay?” Glori asked.

“Sure.  It’s just that during my reading, Madame Bonafide claimed Trismen is going to break up with me for a soccer player.  And I’m going to break my ankle because I don’t want to move forward.”  Kara arched one of her eyebrows, causing the plucked surface to glisten. 

“That could never happen.  I mean, you can’t believe everything Madame Bonafide predicted is fact.  Calling it a prediction means it might come true.  Nothing is certain, except death.”  Glori felt her throat constrict at the last word and despite trying to stay composed, her voice dropped to a whisper.  She smiled bravely.

“But my mom swears by her,” Kara said.  “Mom wouldn’t listen to some kook.”

“Madame Bonafide was too vague to be wrong.  She’s mastered manipulating people who are afraid to follow their hearts.”  Glori stepped back, irritated by her own philosophy. 

A howl drifted from the hedges.  It twisted around the palm trees lining Glori’s property and brushed the tips of cattails running along the hedges. 

Glori hugged her bag against her chest and swallowed hard, uncertain whether she’d seen a grotesque face among the leaves.  “Did you hear something?”

“You’re so jumpy these days.  It must be the caffeine from all that chocolate you eat.  I’m going to have to put you on nutritious diet.”  Kara jutted out her chin to make her Mussolini face.

“It sounded like a cat fight.  Must be some of those strays from the river.”  Glori laughed, relieved Kara’s pouty moment had passed. 

Kara glanced at her diamond-studded watch and clicked her tongue.  “Sorry I got you back so late.  I know your conservative mom has dinner ready by six o’clock on school nights.” 

“Mom just dresses a certain way as an act of humility.  Salt of the earth kind of thing.”

Glori tried not to be embarrassed by her modest parents; they were good people, after all.  It was ironic they were modest compared to the flashy Royal Palm Grove crowd since her dad developed the community along with most of Central Florida.  Mom was more complicated.  She acted older than a woman in her sixties.  Black and navy dominated her wardrobe and her hair never seemed to know what it was supposed to do. 

A cormorant landed in a tree and stretched his wings, catching a blush of the sinking sun.  From the darkest recesses of the palm trees, a figure shifted and then vanished.

“Did you see that?  I know you saw him,” Glori said.

“Your contacts aren’t bothering you again, are they?”

“There was a little, dark –”  Glori couldn’t think of the kind of animal.

“Spider?” Kara scooted toward her steering wheel and wiped her seat.

“A squatty face on an enormous opossum’s body.  Staring at us.” 

“Well, tell him I’d stay for some of your mother’s fudge, but I have to study for our big history exam tomorrow.”

“Me, too.  Thanks for the ride.  And for helping me figure out my life.  I’ve got to get out before I lose my mind.  I was thinking if I moved to New York, there would be lots of snow.  I’ve never seen snow before.”

“It’s decided.  Go with New York.  So, we’re on for sneaking over to Ybor City this Saturday?  It’s your night to drive,” Kara said.

“I’ve got curfew at midnight.  It’s too far for me to get back in time,” Glori said.

“You’re going to be on your own soon.  It’s time you stood up for yourself,” Kara said. 

“I don’t want to hurt Mom’s feelings.  She gets upset when I least expect it,” Glori said.

“Start by telling her you need a car,” Kara said, with a twist of her wrist.  Without looking back, she glided out of the driveway. 

“I’ll do that,” Glori mumbled to herself.

Glori turned toward her stucco house and looked at the cobwebs in the window sills.  Wilted peace lilies ran the length of the loggia shading the front door.  She never swept away the cobwebs or replaced the flowers – and neither did her mother.

Glori entered through the garage because she couldn’t open the front door.  It had been blocked since she was six or seven.  Holding her breath so the musty smell didn’t overwhelm her, she swung the door shut.  Mom had taped wax paper over the glass, and had topped it off with a layer of foil, “for privacy.”  Before walking through the laundry room, Glori made sure she put her keys in her purse so she wouldn’t lose them.  Zigzagging around the clothes piled on the floor, she sighed.  To reach the breakfast room, she pushed aside Dad’s shirts.  Although unworn for several years, they remained hanging from a metal clamp on the door. 

The breakfast area was a junkyard.  It had been impossible to sit at the table ever since Glori turned twelve.  She paused to admire her kindergarten finger paintings, ripped and still taped to the walls.  She was flattered Mom appreciated them.  The foil wrapped around the window unit, “to keep out the wind,” crinkled cheerfully. 

 

 

 

 

 

The Revolutionary Princess

 

Synopsis

 

Historical Fiction

 

 

During 1753, Hannah Stockton is a seventeen-year-old debutante in Elizabethtown, New Jersey, USA.  Her family of affluent academics is involved with relocating Princeton College to the quiet community.  Hannah imagines herself importing fine fabrics and china as a successful decorator for the stodgy New England mansions. 

In her haste to locate a lost letter from one of her favorite suitors, Hannah meets the handsome young man, Elias Boudinot, at the postmaster’s office.  She is smitten by his charm and authority.  As she gets to know Elias better, she learns he is merely thirteen-years-old; yet, he has an exceptional character and carries himself with the gait of a stallion.  Hannah ignores the impetuous boy’s attentions and focuses on the energetic social life within the rising community of wealthy intellectuals.

Elias is persistent and ambitious, but his large family cannot afford to send him to Princeton College so that he can fulfill his dream of becoming a minister.  He accepts his duty to work in a tavern and provide for his siblings.  With the aid of Hannah’s brother, Elias acquires a legal license and begins practicing law in his late teens.  After seven years of pursuing Hannah, Elias wins her hand in marriage with a promise to always love her unconditionally.

The colonists threaten to break their ties with England, but Elias remains loyal to the crown.  During the Revolutionary War, he works tirelessly to aid both English and American prisoners-of-war, taking him away from Hannah and their home.  During their separations, Elias swears his undying love to her, but she can’t convince him to be physically present and available to protect her from desperate enemies.  Hannah must survive raids and transitioning views on slavery during her husband’s absence.  She feels abandoned.  Her family suffers from poverty, violent abuse, and they become social outcasts. 

Hannah longs to return to her life of parties and formal events.  How could fate steal everything important from a defenseless woman who never caused others any harm?  She had been so careful in selecting her husband.  How could she have chosen a man who spent more time helping strangers than by her side?  

Hannah refuses to accept her hardships as being predestined.  She fights for security and attempts to rearrange her fractured relationship with Elias into her most passionate love affair.  

 


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